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 # UnifiedPush for email via IMAP WebPush
 
-This project brings freedom-tech push notifications to mobile email.
+**Instant notifications, but without Big Tech.**
 
-| All of this... | with none of this...
+| Like this... | not this...
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 | [![my-phone-back-5](uploads/a606ded114d55e0905aa722175ae9465/my-phone-back-5.png)](https://wrily.foad.me.uk/my-freedom-phone-cover-design "mine is no ordinary phone, it's a Freedom Phone") | [![1eac0f7294dcec46](uploads/bd35207503c1be7dd8d73fb5356a7961/1eac0f7294dcec46.webp)](https://www.trouw.nl/achterpagina/spotprenten~bc9b7dca/ "from Trouw, 2024-09-13")
 
+This project brings freedom-tech push notifications to mobile email.
+
 Email apps are a priority for wider adoption of UnifiedPush, the standard for independent mobile push notifications. Providers wait for app support, apps wait for server support, but mail servers are diverse.
 
 This project implements:
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-*The section above is also in the [NGI Proposal](NGI-Proposal). The following sections are additional.*
+*The text above is part of the [NGI Proposal](NGI-Proposal). The following sections are additional.*
 
 ## Rationale